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Writing Sex. Good Sex.

28 Mar

From the title of this post you probably know what I’ve been doing for the last couple of days. Yeah…I’ve been entrenched in a couple of love/sex scenes. I know some writers who can’t wait to get to this part in a book. Others may dread the writing of them and I know some who like to leave the “good stuff” till the end :) . Me? I write these scenes when it feels right and the characters are ready. Yes, okay, I am weird when it comes to my characters but this usually means it’s toward the end of a story, when all the scenes are drafted, the emotional arc is strong and the core of the relationship thread has been pulled tight.

To me writing a great sex scene isn’t really writing about sex at all. Not the choreography of it, not exactly how they “do it”, not what tab goes in which slot and when. No, it’s about the emotional journey one or both of the characters go on, what changes from the beginning to the end of the scene, what’s revealed, what level of intimacy is actually achieved. It’s all of that in varying degrees. It could be “quickie/hook-up/just met” sex, it could be “friends with benefits” sex, it could be “can’t keep our hands of each other even when it’s not a good idea” sex and it could be “full-blown loving, emotional, ready to make a committment for real” sex. Regardless, something is happening in the scene besides good humping to further the story along. And if it doesn’t? That scene isn’t really needed. At least in my opinion for great romance to be, well…great.

Each of the pictures in this post tells a story, elicits a particular emotion, I think. Yeah, they’re hot and heavy and getting it on, but they all have the potential to be at their most vulnerable during these moments. Their expressions, their body language, how they hold themselves, how they’re interacting with their partner…all of this tells a story beyond what’s happening physically. Ah…some days it’s great to be a writer!

   

50 Shades of Grey: The FanFic Phenom!

25 Mar

What’s up with that?

My other half called me at work a couple days ago to tell me about how erotic fiction is making national headlines and that Hollywood paid just 7 figures for the movie rights to an erotic romance novel.

I said, “Really? Which book?”

“I don’t know,” was his reply.

“Who was the author?”

“I don’t know that either, but it’s all over the news. You must have seen it.”

“Babe, when was the last time you saw me watch the news?”

“Uh— I dunno…but it’s online, too.”

“Honey, if I’m on the computer, I’m working, not surfing for news…”

Well needless to say, by the time the conversation ended, I still had no idea what he was talking about, but I did make an effort to ask another author friend what the scoop was. She’d heard of it and confirmed that “everyone” was talking about it.

 Everyone but me, apparently. (more…)

Summer Devon, author of Her Outlandish Stranger

12 Mar

Today we are pleased to have Summer Devon visiting Passionate Reads…

A while back I almost sold a book called Her Outlandish Stranger to a New York publisher. The editor finally turned it down because she was uncertain how to sell it. Was it a futuristic? Would she label it as a Regency-set romance? She explained that the publisher didn’t sell books to the reader. They had to pitch all their products to the bookseller. And the fact is bookstore buyers like books they know are easy to shelve—books will sell only if they’re put on the right shelf. They’d found that books that are hard to place will languish on the shelves because they don’t get discovered by the right readers.

Fast forward a few years. I sold that same book to Ellora’s Cave and it came out last week. Like most of my other books that didn’t sell to NYC , the book doesn’t fit easily on a single shelf. But that’s okay because these days, the shelves are gone.

Ebooks are in huge and ever-growing piles known as Amazon, Smashwords, Barnes and Noble and all those other venues. It can look like an overwhelming muddle of books, lists of them, but there are ways for the books to get sorted.

I just got back from a conference where I saw Jon Fine from Amazon and Mark Coker from Smashwords and someone from Barnes and Noble whose name I forgot to write down. Whoops!). And according to these guys, the systems are always getting boosted and improved. It’s a priority for them. After all, it’s in booksellers’ best interest for the readers to click the buy button.

The easiest way to find a book you haven’t read before is to search by the author’s names, of course. But there are all sorts metadata things to help readers find a book (metadata was one of the buzzwords from that conference. So was “discoverability”)  

Metadata turns out to fit all sorts of things. The little description of the book –on paper books the back-cover copy – is a source for the search engines to pick out words that match your favorite types of book and throw them onto your screen.

There are other places for little tags too. You can usually find them about half-way down a book’s page on Amazon. They usually include words that refer to the book’s setting, themes, the author’s name—that sort of thing. The label is “Tags Customers Associate with This Product.”

If you read a book and think hey, there’s no tag for a dragon even though one of the main characters breathes fire and goes by draco, that’s where you add the word in the little tag box. Adding tags will help the book end up in other readers’ hands. Apparently strange tags like “hotty man-child” can help get a book out there because readers search for very odd things.

If you click “agree” on the tags other people have left, that improves chances the book will rise to the top of the huge-and-growing pile I mentioned.

Someday soon, the process of finding books in ebook stores should be almost as easy as walking through a store. The ebook people say the virtual shelf is already more visually interesting.

I’m not sure ebook-shopping could ever be as tactilely fun—I love flipping through pages of a book or sitting in the corner of a store with a new book on my lap. But when I think of all the stories that wouldn’t have found homes in the old world, I guess it’s a trade I’m willing to make.

Her Outlandish Stranger Blurb:

In 2310, Jazz White is one of few surviving soldiers of a hated regime. Now “reprogrammed”, stripped of many of his memories and killing skills, Jazz is an outcast until he’s summoned by the government’s elite time-travel agency and told he must journey to the 1800s. His mission—to protect Eliza Wickman, an English woman trapped in war-torn Spain. Once he arrives in the dreadful place, it becomes clear he’s been tricked. His real mission—Jazz must father her child, who will prove important to the future of civilization.

Guilt-ridden by his deception, Jazz must keep Eliza safe while he escorts her to England, all the while fighting his attraction to her innocent eroticism. But an agent from his time has other plans, and does his best to sabotage Jazz’s efforts. As the connection between him and Eliza grows, the agent could be the least of Jazz’s worries. His biggest fear is far more personal—what will happen once Eliza learns the truth?

Excerpt & Buy Link: http://www.jasminejade.com/p-9875-her-outlandish-stranger.aspx

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http://summerdevon.com

Bad Guys On the Brain

10 Mar


Lately I’ve been spending a lot of time with villains.  I’m still writing romance, but my latest WIPs have had an element of danger and at least one character who wants to make the hero/heroine bleed.

They say that the villain is the hero of his own story, and I used this liberally for my Serial Killer Romance. It was rather fun to cartwheel through the crazy of my honest-to-bob lady killer and show that twisted logic on the page.

I knew this was going to have a tragic ending, knew that my killer wasn’t going to be redeemed, so I could be as disturbing as I wanted and there are parts I wrote that scared even me. But my latest WIP is quite the opposite.

My current villain is very much the hero of his own story, and I hope to make him the hero in a future book. He’s going to do something despicable in this book, something that will affect and destroy several lives. I want the reader to hate him, to shun him and want him to suffer, but I’ll want them to root for him when he gets his own book.

It’d be so much easier if I could use the picture above and cute-kitten him into readers’ good graces, but I don’t think that’ll be possible with the blood of innocents on his hands.

In all my years of writing, I’ve never taken a selfish, soulless man and tried to redeem him enough to be lovable. So I’m looking for help. Anyone have recommendations for a books with dirty rat bastard types who are later redeemed to love him status?

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Sasha

Who likes bad boys, but is not sure yet how she feels about bad guys. And yeah, there’s totally a difference. If you want to hear more of Sasha’s ramblings, visit her at www.sashadevlin.com or follow her on Twitter @SashaDevlin

I Declare it…Pretend Boyfriend Day!

29 Feb

So, I’ve had sick kids home for 3 days in a row! 3 days!! I’ve got edits due and book 2 in my new paranormal/urban fantasy series due at the end of March. That’s like…almost tomorrow. Do you realize how hard it is to write gripping, emotional, HOT sex to the sounds of Mickey Mouse Club House? Dora? OMG, Tinkerbell? That is just so wrong, on so many fronts LOL.

So while I haven’t been able to get into my story to the depth I’d like this week, I’ve still been using the time wisely. I’ve been searching for inspiration pictures for my many heroes under development. What!? That IS SO time spent wisely! I’ve found so many great images which has led to many plot bunnies developing for new stories. Not exactly what I intended, but it’s been great to outline some new ideas.

While I was doing this “research”, my mind has completely retreated to fantasy land. Oh-ho, right? But you know, when you look at a great picture, don’t you all imagine what he’d be like as a friend, lover, a partner, a for-real-boyfriend? Well, I do so I’ve declared today at Passionate Reads Pretend Boyfriend Day. If you could have anyone as YOUR boyfriend, who would it be? You can see mine below. You’re welcome :) .

It’s Not Me, It’s You

25 Feb

My name is Sasha, and if necessary I will break up with your series. Though I want it to have all the noise and fireworks of a sporting event, it will turn out more like this:

Complete with that facial expression. That’s my mad face

When I was younger, the very thought of quitting a series gave me hives. I figured I would read Baby Sitter’s Club and The Box Car Children until the author died (I was sure I would out live her) and had read them all.  It never occurred to me that there would be deal breakers and I would have to walk.

Now I know my hot buttons:

If all the books are essentially the same, just with different h/h names.

If there’s a tortured character that I’m totally invested in, but the author just keeps throwing random books in that in no way further the series story arc.

If the story arc involves a BIG BAD and there is never any sort of ground gained by the good guys (I LIVE for comeuppance)

And if characters start acting out of character. This is the most disheartening. While I’m willing to put up with disappointing books or a twist that upsets me, a character who is suddenly polar opposite (with NO explanation) will make me jump ship faster than anything else.

I’m working on series/trilogy this year and I want to make sure people stick with me.  I don’t want the break up speech.

What makes you abandon a series, or will you read until the bitter end?

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Sasha

Who promises not to break up with YOU. Yeah, I’m talking about you, foxy lady! If you want to hear more of Sasha’s ramblings, visit her at www.sashadevlin.com or follow her on Twitter @SashaDevlin

Writer Basics: The Hook and The Line

19 Feb

No matter what technological changes occur in the publishing industry, good writing is still what an editor needs to see and what makes a reader choose to pick up another book by that same author. A veteran editor once told me she usually made a decision about a manuscript’s marketability by page 3, but a great hook could get her to hang in there for the whole first chapter.

I am very proud of the fact that one of my hooks made its way into several seminars and at least one how-to-write book that I know of. The following is the first line of my steamy revenge thriller, PRETTY MAIDS IN A ROW –

“Mizz Wallace, did you, or did you not, willingly take Senator Ziegler’s penis into your mouth on more than one occasion?”

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Of course, the real trick is to get that editor to keep on reading beyond the end of Chapter One. This is where The Line (or two) comes in. Basically it’s a hook at the end of a chapter to ensure the reader keeps turning those pages.

Here are a few of the chapter endings, in no particular order, from the same book –

* * * *  Stretching luxuriously, she felt Jerry stir beside her. As she did first thing every morning, she reached for her glasses and switched on the lamp. Holly turned back to wake her future husband with a kiss, and froze.

The dark-haired man lying naked in her bed was a complete stranger.

* * * * A week ago, she had never even heard of the Little Sister Society. Now, a group of virtual strangers could connect her to a violent murder.

* * * * “You see?” He whispered the words against her mouth. “I can be nice. There’s nothing to be afraid of.”

She raised her lashes and met his gaze. They both knew just how wrong he was.

* * * *  There was no turning back now. She would be David Wells’ mistress…and he would be her instrument of revenge.

* * * *  David saw Butch’s bullet-ridden body as he stepped over the threshold. But he also glimpsed two agents pressed flat against the walls on each side of him.

“Shit!” was the last thought he had before all hell broke loose.

* * * *  If it was the last thing he did, he would make Wells regret the day he tried to steal Philip Sinkiewicz’s woman.

* * * *  Philip kissed the top of her head. “You’re all I have, honey. I’d do anything for you.”

 So, fellow writers and readers, what are some of your favorite hooks and lines?

 And by the way, if I’ve tempted anyone into reading the rest of PRETTY MAIDS IN A ROW, thank you for the support - Buy Link

 Happy creating,

Marilyn Campbell, www.marilyncampbell.com

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